Pavone

This is a demo showing how Pavone analyzes your speaking practice

Filler Words Used

So
yeah
Yeah
so
yeah
5 filler words in 75s (4.0/min) is quite high and significantly distracts from your message.

Speech

Full text with filler word highlights

So my name is Anya and I've been a past seven years. My biggest strength is I am working today and not thinking or drinking. So, yeah, had to persuade someone last year when I was doing the job. Yeah, on my resume. There's a lot of side hustles and main works, but they're in the plan, so, yeah.

AI-Improved Script

My name is Anya, and I've been in this field for the past seven years. My biggest strength is my dedication - I show up every day ready to work and maintain focus throughout. Last year, I had to persuade a challenging stakeholder during a project. I approached the situation by clearly presenting the data and listening to their concerns, which ultimately led to a successful outcome. Looking at my resume, you'll see a variety of experiences including both main roles and side projects. Each of these has contributed to my skill set and demonstrates my entrepreneurial mindset and ability to manage multiple priorities effectively.
This improved script is based on your original content and optimized for your interview intent. Use it as inspiration to enhance your delivery.

Improvement Tips

  • Try to reduce filler words like "so" and "yeah" - pause instead to gather your thoughts
  • Structure your answer with a clear beginning, middle, and end
  • Practice the STAR method (Situation, Task, Action, Result) for interview questions

Interview Question Feedback

Detailed analysis for each interview question

1

Tell me about yourself and your experience.

Strengths

  • Mentioned years of experience which establishes credibility
  • Attempted to highlight a key personal strength

Areas for Improvement

  • The introduction was vague and lacked specific details about the field or role
  • The description of the "biggest strength" was unclear and could be misinterpreted

Key Suggestion

Prepare a concise 30-second elevator pitch that clearly states your name, role, years of experience, and one standout achievement.

2

Can you describe a time you had to persuade someone?

Strengths

  • Referenced a real situation from recent work experience

Areas for Improvement

  • The answer lacked the STAR framework — no clear Situation, Task, Action, or Result
  • Did not explain what was being persuaded or the outcome achieved
  • Used filler words ("so, yeah") instead of providing concrete details

Key Suggestion

Structure your answer using the STAR method: describe the Situation, your Task, the specific Action you took to persuade, and the measurable Result.

3

Walk me through your resume.

Strengths

  • Acknowledged having diverse experience across multiple roles

Areas for Improvement

  • Used vague terms like "side hustles and main works" without naming specific roles or companies
  • Did not connect past experience to the role being interviewed for

Key Suggestion

Pick 2-3 most relevant roles from your resume and briefly explain what you did, what you achieved, and how it prepares you for this position.

Visual Setting

AI analysis of your video setup, lighting, framing, and background

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